Look at rough draft. copy a paragraph that has mostly short simple sentences. change your paragraph by combining two simple sentences into one. underline your change. explain if you will keep the change for your final essay and why or why not.

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the main character of "the secret life of walter mitty" retreats into a false pretense as a means escape from his mundane reality -- this is a flagrant issue seen in societies abroad, typically found in young adults and it is robbing our youths of their childhood.

explanation:

a thesis -- a well developed, formal thesis is required to be one sentence long. there are many themes in "the secret life of walter mitty" and i had resolved to give you one of the simpler ones while still honing it with class.

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