Ater you have created your draft, work with a peer to revise your paper. using the revision checklist below, enter your answers to each question in the space below. peer editing checklist use the following checklist to you evaluate your partner’s writing. remember to offer 2 constructive suggestions and point out 2 parts you especially like. can you identify the main objective of this document? yes/no if so, write the objective does the document contain any first or second person pronouns (i, me, we, you, us)? yes/no (it should be in third person only! ) is this document clear and easy to understand? yes/no does the document contain step by step instructions that are easy to follow? yes/no is the tone appropriate for the audience? yes/no is the content appropriate for the audience? yes/no does the document include an introduction and a conclusion/review? yes/no does the document include at least one visual? yes/no does the visual clarify something in the instructions? does it add to the effectiveness of the document? yes/no

Buck did not cry out. he did not check himself, but drove in upon spitz, shoulder to shoulder, so hard that he missed the throat. they rolled over and over in the powdery snow. spitz gained his feet almost as though he had not been overthrown, slashing buck down the shoulder and leaping clear. twice his teeth clipped together, like the steel jaws of a trap, as he backed away for better footing, with lean and lifting lips that writhed and snarled. read this passage. explain what the conflict shows about buck and spitz.

Summarize in 3-5 complete sentences the conditions of life on the reservation as depicted by chief red cloud’s speech. cite evidence from the text to support your answer.

Read this passage: many manufacturers prefer plastic as a material for containers because it can be molded into many shapes. but plastic is not very strong. it must be fused with glass or steel for strength. it is also not very durable. even the strongest plastic can break under enough pressure. the biggest disadvantage to using plastic is that it does not decompose. while plastic can be recycled, doing so is tedious and difficult. while it may be more expensive and difficult to work with, aluminum is a much stronger building material with far greater tensile strength. it conducts electricity because it is metal. best of all, aluminum is very easy to recycle. even if it is thrown away, it decomposes much more quickly than most manufacturing materials. how does the compare-and-contrast organizational pattern of the passage support the author's purpose? a. the passage gradually leads up to the point about decomposition to inform the reader about the importance of recycling plastics. b. the passage lists the advantages and disadvantages of each material to make a case for the use of plastic and not aluminum in containers. c. the passage begins with a description of plastic's problems in order to call attention to the good qualities of aluminum. d. the passage shows the superiority of aluminum in order to make a case for the production of stronger plastics.