A) it appeals to the feelings and emotions of the audience b) it contains facts and figures that to prove the authors point c) it establishes the author as credible by quoting other authority figures d) it uses general facts in order to build toward a more specific theory

oooh~ i love the salem witch trials.

sadly though, i cannot you if you don't post the paragraph. i'm confused on what to write!

if you would kindly post the paragraph though, i'm more than happy to you.

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what can i you with?

are you asking for advice? if so, i think its great! i like how you gave specific details. i think you will get a good grade on it!

she needs to add a conclusion summing up the entire essay along with an ending sentence to complete it all nicely.