Imagine that you are living away from home .your sister at home is rather carefree about food, work and rest and is spoiling her health. write her persuasive letter telling her how she can improve her health.

dear sister i'm sick of your old ways, you need to take responsibility for you actions and go to work if you continue this unhealthy life style it will lead to your demise.

in this passage from chapter 6 of "animal farm", by george orwell, what the author is ridiculing in this passage is the frivolity of some rules.

clover, the mare, believes she remembers that the fourth commandment forbade sleeping in beds because it was something that humans did. snowball, napoleon, and the pigs are brain-workers who look after the welfare of the farm. they are the obvious leaders because they are smart, and so they are entitled to eat the best food and sleep in beds. it is squealer, who says these lines making the difference between sleeping with sheets, what humans do, and sleeping in beds, what pigs do. the unwillingness to question authority makes the oppressed to obey without thinking.

i think that the answer is substandard.