So i have to write an essay on a topic of my choice and i’m having a lot of trouble thinking of a topic and thesis. it’s on the great gatsby and i was thinking of something like “the great gatsby further proves that the american dream is improbable,” but i am unsure of what else to add for a thesis/topic. : c

Hi! So I like your thesis; it sounds good.  Honestly, I don't think you need the word "further" in there, unless you've already done an essay or project where you discussed the american dream being improbable.  

I think just saying, "The Great Gatsby proves that the American dream is improbable" is much more concise and more powerful.

I think you could also incorporate different cultural aspects during the time period, to prove your point.

Hope this helps!

LMK if you have any other q's!

the correct order is:

you're your own worst enemy:

they're going to say what they say, but

their opinions aren't holding you

back. it's your self-defeatist

attitude that's keeping your work

from getting its due.