Which sentence uses commas correctly?

there was no moon, that night so we couldn't see the street well.

we can go on a picnic, but it may rain.

some people wanted, to postpone the vote, and others demanded a vote that very night.

the boys were late for the bus but luckily the bus, was also late.

The missionaries who appear in the novel are colonists from britain portugal spain italy

Evaluate the tone of this cover letter. is it appropriate?

If music be the food of love, play on; give me excess of it, that, surfeiting, the appetite may sicken, and so die. that strain again! it had a dying fall: o, it came o'er my ear like the sweet sound, that breathes upon a bank of violets, stealing and giving odour! now read the excerpt from "the love song of j. alfred prufrock." for i have known them all already, known them all: have known the evenings, mornings, afternoons, i have measured out my life with coffee spoons; i know the voices dying with a dying fall beneath the music from a farther room. what does the phrase "dying fall" most likely mean in both excerpts