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English, 12.10.2019 14:00 kell22wolf

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i am a boy who lived in nevada and moved to michigan. my parents are very nice, and they are always pushing for me to succeed. my parents got me into this school so i can get a better education and a better future. my life is great and my dad is pushing me to try new thing, and i have. today i am doing swimming, fishing, and my favorite thing i do is i love to wrestle.
last year i made it to my state finals, i was with my team, and it was a double elimination. we lost our first round against the other team. but we went into the loser’s bracket for another chance. we won our second round easily but the 3 round we were right on top of each other. we were tied by pins and barely over them by points i’m in the heavyweights class, so that means i usually go last. i went against the previous kid and we were tied if i lost we went home but if he lost they all went home. i was losing an almost got pinned but had a lucky break. in the 3rd round, my opponent had a mistake that cost him the match and the day. i had gotten lucky enough to slip behind him, and i was able to bear hug him and put him in a pin.
we ended up wrestling two more rounds, and we won both of them. the first one was a breeze but the second one was a bit of a sweat. it was close enough that we weren’t sure if we were going to beat them but luckily we did. and that made us second place for the entire tournament. we were all happy even though we only got second it was a fun day. the next day we all went to practice and improved on the things we could’ve done better and went over what we did right and did wrong.

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