Iwrote a poem for a contest. can you look at it and make any corrections

jibanyan is sweet jibanyan is sour but together he and nate just made a flower. you'd never think they would ever be a team. but it's all because of jibanyan's smile which is stronger than a hyper beam. best buddies together they'll never leave each other. friends forever.

“heartwork each day is born with a sunrise and ends in a sunset, the same way we open our eyes to see the light, and close them to hear the dark. you have no control over how your story begins or ends. but by now, you should know that all things have an ending. every spark returns to darkness. every sound returns to silence. and every flower returns to sleep with the earth. the journey of the sun and moon is predictable. but yours, is your ultimate art.” ― suzy kassem what does this quote mean to you? and why? i'm not looking for anything in particular, i just wanted to know. : )

What is the most likely interference a reader can make about daniels emotional state

An essay about how social media is bad for some young girls that use it for the wrong reasons