Olivia writes an elevator pitch.

my elevator pitch

my name is olivia styles. i have just graduated with my associate degree in health care administration. i have always felt empathy for people with illnesses. in high school i was a volunteer at the community hospital. i realized i wanted to specialize in health care administration during a summer internship between my junior and senior years in college. when i graduated, i took a part-time job as a paramedic. now i am looking for a full-time position that will propel me into a meaningful health care career in a hospital.

which information should olivia add to her elevator pitch to show her commitment to the field?

Olivia should add WHY she wants a health career in a hospital. She mentions that she 'realized she wanted to specialize in health care administration during a summer internship' - but not WHAT happened to make her feel that way.

When giving an elevator pitch, it's always a good idea to add a relevant story - make them relate / care about you a bit more.

judy jones is an attractive woman who receives attention from many men throughout the story.   despite her beautiful appearance, she is superficial and callous.   she is an aggressive woman who goes after any man she desires but she is not happy.   she is fickle and is never satisfied.   her beauty is only skin deep.   dexter breaks down because he knows his dreams are unattainable.   he believes that wealth and physical beauty are what will make him happy.   he soon realizes that she has lost her attractive looks.   it is not all what he had planned.

jim mohr

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