There is one verb tense error in this paragraph. correct it:

that said, the first truly accepted take-off and flight powered by nothing other than the pilot himself, occurred almost fifty years later in november 1961, when derek piggott flies the sumpac ( southampton university’s man powered aircraft)a then world-record distance of 650-yards (594m).

The verb tense error in the paragraph is: flies

That said, the first truly accepted take-off and flight powered by nothing other than the pilot himself, occurred almost fifty years later in November 1961, when Derek Piggott flew the SUMPAC (Southampton University’s Man Powered AirCraft) a then world-record distance of 650-yards (594m).

The verb "flies" should be in past-tense because throughout the paragraph all the verbs are in past tense, indicating that an event has already occurred. Therefore, it should be replaced with the word "flew."

for this, you need to remember something significant in your own life, for example, if you were bullied when you were younger, you can mention your memories on this and touch on how such treatment can harm other kids your age either physically or mentally. (racism, car crashes, a parent in the hospital are all very good subjects, think hard on it! )

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