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review the following essay.

which pair of sentences needs to be revised?

a- living in centerville centerville is a good place to live because it has great schools and a welcoming community.

b- centerville’s schools are excellent with wonderful teachers. the schools have excellent teachers who are experts in their fields.

c- in addition, students can pick from a wide variety of sports and other activities. centerville’s schools are so respected that students from other towns come here for a good education.

d-centerville is also well-known for its warm and friendly citizens. indeed, my family and i have made a lot of dear friends here.

e- in short, centerville offers the best of small town american life. nowhere else will you find so many fun things to do and so many wonderful people who care about you.

use it to buy the fattest block of cheese

180 degrees 90 degrees acute angle acute triangle

180 degrees is the measure of a straight angle 90 degrees is the measure of a right angle an acute angle is an angle with a measure between 0° and 90°. an acute triangle has three acute angles.

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mhenman

geometry g7 connections academy

180 degrees 90 degrees acute angle acute triangle

180 degrees is the measure of a straight angle 90 degrees is the measure of a right angle an acute angle is an angle with a measure between 0° and 90°. an acute triangle has three acute angles.

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sherly11635

world history vocabulary(connections academy)

absolute dating anthropologist archaeologist artifact

the process of determining the age of a bone or some other org… an expert in the study of the races, beliefs, customs, etc. of… a scientist who learns about ancient people by studying the th… an object made by a human being, typically an item of cultural…

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lexi_east

american government connections academy

1.1. when the framers created the legis… 1.2. study this cartoon about gerrymand… 1.3. "congress does not have an unlimit… 1.4. why did the framers of the constit…

b.) the framers formed a bicameral legislature as a compromise… b.) it dilutes the power of people's votes by creating as many… c.) a tax on parts of the interstate highway system. a.) they wanted the nation to have a unified currency.

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mary-bate

connections academy english 1 grammar unit 1

mcdonald's a fast food restaurant does… winter, the coldest season of all, cove… little man, a tidy child does not like… identify the appositive phrase: the ins…

mcdonald's, a fast food restaurant, does not serve tacos. correct little man, a tidy child, does not like to have dirty clothes… a large cockroach with hairy legs

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acg1120

spanish 1 connections academy

en el desayuno el cereal el desayuno los huevos

for breakfast cereal breakfast eggs

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jocelyncurrie2022

chinese connections academy

姥爷 你好 你 好

grandfather from mom's side (lǎoye) hello (nǐ hǎo; you good) you (nǐ; you have a ni cap) good (hǎo; how good is this? )

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snarker6

world history b unit 8 ww2 (connections academy)

aircraft carrier anschluss appeasement atlantic charter

large naval ship that accommodates the taking off and landing… hitler's unification of austria and germany (1938). the policy of giving in to an aggressor's demands in order to… the agreement in which franklin roosevelt and winston churchil…

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patticam

english 10b unit 1 connections academy

simile comedy idiom setting

a comparison using "like" or "as" a humorous work of drama an expression peculiar to a language that takes on a meaning o… the time and place of a story

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mdccwhite

connections academy spanish 1a unit 6 vocabulary

el agua beber el café el cereal

water to drink coffee cereal

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mdccwhite

connections academy spanish 1a unit 4 vocabulary

a ver . . aburrido, aburrida el almuerzo arte

let's see . . boring lunch art

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mdccwhite

connections academy geometry 10a unit 3

conclusion conditional contrapositive converse

the part q following then an if-then statement; if p then q if not q, then not p if q, then p

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mdccwhite

connections academy spanish 1a unit 9 vocabulary

a la una a las ocho ¿a qué hora? ¡ay! ¡qué pena!

at one (o'clock) at eight (o'clock) (at) what time? oh! what a shame!

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sawzaw78

connections academy, grade 5 science, unit 2, cells and kingdoms

angiosperm bilateral symmetry cambium cell

a flowering plant that produces seeds within a fruit the property of being divisible into symmetrical halves on eit… a layer of cells in a plant that produces new phloem and xylem… the smallest part of a living thing

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mdccwhite

connections academy spanish 1a unit 2 vocabulary

(a mí) me gusta (a mí) me gusta más (a mí) me gusta mucho (a mí) no me gusta

i like i like to better. (i prefer to . .) i like to a lot. i don't like

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mdccwhite

connections academy spanish 1a unit 7 vocabulary

algo el arroz las bebidas el bistec

something rice beverages beefsteak

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himynameisjeffey

connections academy science quiz

skepticism ethics personal bias culture bias

an attitude of doubt the principles of right and wrong that guide an individual in… comes from a person's likes and dislikes stems from the culture in which a person grows up

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maddie6014

science 7th grade test connections academy

which of the following could be true of… a biologist studying a desert ecosystem… a nonnative species of animal is introd… in an island ecosystem, fox and skunks…

they share the same niche the snake and lizard use the same limiting resource biodiversity and ecosystem health will both decrease in the fu… skunks and toads have a predator-prey relationship.

this essay is about basketball hope you like it, also dont forget to give me a good rating

  a basketball team comprises of five players as mentioned above. the five players include point guard, shooting guard, small forward, power forward and center (ramen 56). the rules do not limit players to certain locations. however, evolution of basketball from the 1980s made players assume certain locations and roles. the point guard should be the fastest team member, and is responsible for organizing the attacks of the team. he does this by making sure that the right player has the ball at the right time (wissel 87). the shooting guard creates mainly long-range shorts and watches the opponent's last player on the defense. the small forward member of the team is majorly responsible for scoring points through dribble penetration and cuts to the basket. he also rebounds and plays actively. power forward plays invasively having their back to the basket and when on defense he plays under the basket or against the opponent's power forward (ramen 54). the center often uses his size and height to score and safeguard the basket when on defense. however, there is no rule that limits the players to these descriptions.  

              there are four quarters in regular basketball game, and each takes 10 or 12 minutes (ramen 67). in college basketball games, the game uses two-twenty minute halves. extra time should take 5 minutes in all games except in high school, where it takes four minutes. teams need to change sides after the first half of the game. a typical basketball game might take approximately 2 hours excluding the time when the game is inactive. at any given time, the court should have ten players, 5 from both sides. despite substitutions being unrestricted, it can only be performed when the game is stopped (wissel 51). additionally, teams must have a uniform comprising of a jersey and a pair of shorts. for identification purposes, the jersey should have a unique number in the team printed at the front and back. in some instances, the jerseys have the names of players, sponsors and team printed on them.  

              in conclusion, regulation basketball hoop comprises of a rim or basket attached to a backboard. violating the rules of the game results in a change of the shot clock if the committed by the defense or loss of ball possession. basketball teams comprise of five players, which includes the point guard, shooting guard, power forward, small forward and center. a typical basketball game might take approximately 2 hours excluding the time when the game is inactive.  

if i was falling raindrop:

1. land safely (pretty sure that’s a tough one)

2. wished that time slowed down

3. a beautiful ending