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you write a paragraph that contains only compound sentences. your readers complain that it is hard to follow your ideas in the paragraph because of all your sentences are quite long.

which is the best method to revise the paragraph?

-add a couple more compound sentences

-change the compound sentences to complex sentences

-change the compound sentences to simple sentences

-change some of the sentences to simple and complex sentences

change some sentences to simple and complex sentences

hi u can delete this

answer: buck is a dog living a charmed life on the estate of judge miller, during the time of the klondike gold rush in 1897. he is the king of all the animals on the estate and as such enjoys special privileges, such as the run of the estate and the admirable position of being the judge's favorite dog.

this all ends the day he accompanies manuel on a walk through the orchard to a flag station, where manuel sells him to a stranger. manuel sells buck, because he has gambling debts he needs to pay and a family to support.

this one act changes buck's life irrevocably. it is the catalyst for the rest of the story about buck and his transformation from domestic pet to wild animal.

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