Is there anything wrong with this sentence?
"my neighbors are the haughtiest in the neighborhood."
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I couldn't find any grammatical errors in the sentence! I would say though, you could use simpler word to describe the neighbors that still drives the point home. For example, instead of "haughtiest" you could just use the word "proudest" or and it would still drive the point home.

Hope this helps!

when alex falls for the charming new boy at school, cole -- a handsome, funny, sports star who adores her - she can't believe she's finally found her soul who truly loves and understands her.  

at first, alex is blissfully happy. sure, cole seems a little jealous of her relationship with her close friend zack, but what guy would want his girlfriend spending all her time with another boy? as the months pass, though, alex can no longer ignore cole's small put-downs, pinches, or increasingly violent threats.  

as alex struggles to come to terms with the sweet boyfriend she fell in love with and the boyfriend whose "love" she no longer recognizes, she is forced to choose -- between her "true love" and herself.

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