Get an apple for your brother. that water is very chilly. he slipped on the icy sidewalk.

Is this sentence correction if so I think it is Please get an apple for your brother, the water is very chilly, he slipped on the icy sidewalk.

judy jones is an attractive woman who receives attention from many men throughout the story.   despite her beautiful appearance, she is superficial and callous.   she is an aggressive woman who goes after any man she desires but she is not happy.   she is fickle and is never satisfied.   her beauty is only skin deep.   dexter breaks down because he knows his dreams are unattainable.   he believes that wealth and physical beauty are what will make him happy.   he soon realizes that she has lost her attractive looks.   it is not all what he had planned.

its probably fingerprint or personality