Iam writing an essay about my career and i need with perfecting my introduction. “the career i chose to present this year was photography. as most people know photographers are professionals that focus on the art of photography with a digital or film camera. photographers use artificial or natural lighting to snap pictures of various people, places and things in different settings.” (hearting all)

I would phrase it differently, such as; “The career I decided to present this year was photography. Photographers have made themselves well know as professionals who create artistic photos with a digital or film camera, photographers can use artificial or natural lighting to snap pictures of various people, places and objects in different positions and settings”.

sentences vary by structure as well as by function. there are compound, complex, and compound-complex sentences.

simple sentence

i like to read.

a simple sentence has one independent clause.

compound sentence

i like to read, and i also like to write.

a compound sentence includes more than one independent clause, connected by a coordinating conjunction (and, but, for, nor, or, so, or yet).

complex sentence

i prefer to read books that are bestsellers.

a complex sentence includes one independent clause and one or more dependent clauses. (a dependent clause is one that cannot stand alone.) types of dependent clauses include relative clauses (i kicked the boy who pinched me), adverb clauses (i am going home now because i have a curfew), and noun clauses (i don't know what to do next).

compound-complex sentence

although i prefer to read current bestsellers, i do like to read old agatha christie mysteries, and i also like some 20th-century science fiction.

compound-complex sentences take a bunch of clauses (multiple independent clauses, and one or more dependent clauses) and toss them together like a salad. although these sentences take practice to write in a grammatically correct fashion, they can hold a tremendous amount of meaning, and are common in academic writing.