Fix the fragments, run-ons, and comma splices. correct the paragraph so that it contains grammatically correct sentence structure and utilizes proper punctuation. (yes, you can highlight, copy, and paste the following paragraph text into your answer box and then make your corrections.) students at george brown college have the option of attending classes at one of three very different campuses these campuses are located in three different parts of the city. the waterfront campus. the newest of the three campuses is located by sugar beach. it is home to health sciences, which includes nursing, dental hygiene, fitness and lifestyle management and other programs such as medical office administration. also pathways to practical nursing. and the psw program. the waterfront campus also has a tutoring and learning centre, which is located in the library, it is open from 9: 00 to 6: 00, monday to friday. if you need with english or math, you can go to meet a tutor. the tlc at st. james has a library and all of the tlcs have grammar and math workshops which are free to attend you should check the website for the latest updates and workshop details.

Students at George Brown College have the option of attending classes at one of three very different campuses these campuses are located in three different parts of the city. The Waterfront Campus. The newest of the three campuses is located by Sugar Beach. It is home to Health Sciences, which includes Nursing, dental hygiene, fitness and lifestyle management and other programs such as medical office administration. Also, Pathways to Practical Nursing. And the PSW program. The Waterfront Campus also has a Tutoring and Learning Centre, which is located in the library, it is open from 9:00 to 6:00, Monday to Friday. If you need help with English or math, you can go to meet a tutor. The TLC at St. James has a library and all of the TLCs have grammar and math workshops which are free to attend you should check the website for the latest updates and workshop details.

  plan: i will begin with a quotation about the importance of unity in a community. then, i will state my claim that an activity will unite our school by creating a shared vision, purpose, and direction. in the body, i will use three main points that describe the different avenues the students can take: through a variety of clubs, through a special event, or through an awareness week. i will provide evidence about other towns that have unity activities and the kinds of events that they include. pictures will illustrate my three main points in action. for the ending, i will restate the main idea in a new way and pose a question to keep the audience thinking. 

might need to ask questions people no or have read somthing about.