English, 30.06.2019 05:00 louiecampos

Which sentence should be revised for clarity a. the speech about online data mining was entertaining and informative b. the speech that the computer science expert gave regarding online data mining was informative and entertaining c. the speech that computer science expert gave regarding online data miming was filled with information also very entertaining d. the expert in computer science gave an informative and entertaining speech about online data miming

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I believe the sentence that should be revised for clarity to be letter c) The speech that computer science expert gave regarding online data mining was filled with information also very entertaining.

Explanation:

The sentence above presents a quite confusing structure when it mentions the qualities of the speech. The speaker means to say the speech offered information and entertainment, but he/she does it in a strange manner: "was filled with information also very entertaining." We can sense there is a conjunction lacking. Besides that, the use of parallel structures - words or phrases that have the same function - would also be beneficial to the sentence.

There are at least a couple of corrections we can use to improve this structure, as you can see in the options below:

The speech that computer science expert gave regarding online data mining was not only informative but also very entertaining;The speech that computer science expert gave regarding online data mining was filled with information and entertainment;The speech that computer science expert gave regarding online data mining was very informative and entertaining.

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glamis thou art, and cawdor; and shalt be what thou art promis'd; yet do i fear thy nature; it is too full o' the milk of human kindness to catch the nearest way: thou wouldst be great; art not without ambition; but without the illness should attend it. what thou wouldst highly, that wouldst thou holily; wouldst not play false, and yet wouldst wrongly win: thou'dst have, great glamis, that which cries, "thus thou must do, if thou have it: and that which rather thou dost fear to do than wishest should be undone." hie thee hither, that i may pour my spirits in thine ear; and chastise with the valor of my tongue all that impedes thee from the golden round, which fate and metaphysical aid doth seem to have thee crown'd withal.

he lacks ambition.

he is hesitant.

he lacks courage.

he has moral scruples.

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i think there should be answer choices

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