Can someone revise my writing? we did a 5 minute quick write in class and i feel like i liked the idea, but it's scattered a lot. trust is the fundamental right that everyone should feel. the right of knowing that you are safe. that you are whole. but how can we feel safe when family is not family anymore? when friends are not true friends? when siblings have up and left and when loved ones no longer want to love? how can we feel safe on this planet when there is no one to latch on to? no one to hold. no one to call home. and no where to run. how can we love when we have been taught what love is not? how can we even know who we are when we are taught what to be? how can we fight when we have been taught that being broken down is fit to the standards of our society? how can we make it through this life if we don’t even know how to live? some say love is the most powerful emotion. some even say fear. but some argue that trust is the most heart-felt emotion. but how can this be when trust is so easily tossed out the window? family tosses it out. friends toss it out. society tosses it out. because trust is damageable, easily fractured, and the most delicate, fragile emotion to be messed with. this life is not ours if we cannot feel trust with our most endeared ones. our life is a game and we are mere chess pieces.

Capitalize trust and make sure to add a comma after safe instead of a period, jsut check your capitalization and your commas and periods, i'm pretty sure the rest is right. Hope this helps you out.

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)