During the proofreading stage, writers analyze word choice to make sure the intended meaning is clear provide relevant supporting details in each paragraph rearrange the organization of their papers use standard marks to indicate necessary corrections

During the proofreading stage, writers analyze word choice to make sure the intended meaning is clear.

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the anecdote makes readers feel sorry for the man’s lack of heritage, then reminds readers that the man has an equally valuable heritage.