Read this example: what is wrong with the quotation in the example? processed food cause serious health issues in children and young adults. according to dr. gretchen kim, a pediatric nutritionist, "many of the serious health issues i see in children are caused by processed foods."a. the quote doesn't make sense compared to the rest of the sentence b. the quote is to short and doesn't provide enough information c. the quote repeat what has been said instead of adding new informationd. the quote doesn't let the reader know the source's qualifications

Me asap it's an e2020 test and it's timedread the rough draft of a student's conclusion to anargumentative editorial.(1) year-round schooling would student achievement.(2) not so much information would have to be crammed intonine months. (3) furthermore, the elimination of long breaks,particularly summer break, would significantly reduce"learning loss" and the additional time wasted at thebeginning of each academic year to reteach previouslylearned material. (4) it is clear that year-round schooling students learn and retain more. (5) the united statesis not the only country to experiment with a year-roundschool schedule. (6) although many still claim that evidenceabout year-round school and its link to higher achievement isinconclusive, these people need to open their eyes and seethat students in these schools consistently score higher oncertain assessments than students who attend schools withtraditional nine-month calendars. (7) it is about time that wereplaced our outdated and inefficient school calendars.what revision would most strengthen sentence 1?