Can you highlight or point out things i should change. the secretone morning, maria had a dream about her mom when she was a kid. in the dream, maria saw her mom in a tube when she was a kid. when maria woke up, she went downstairs and asked her dad about her mom but all he said was that “she just disappeared one day”. his countenance showed irritation by the question so, i did not tell him about the dream. i told ixy but all she said: “was to drop it and let it go.”      later on, i could not stop thinking about mom. after everyone telling me to let it go, it was difficult. i was so focused on my mom that i didn’t see ixy. she came out of nowhere, and all i heard was a scream. i found her on the floor in the middle of the street, just lying there, she was not moving, i took her to the hospital but she… it took her a while to wake up and when she did. my dad yelled at me but all that i could think of is why i was so focused on my mom and having weird dreams about her. so i told my family “that i will be back”. i am going to go get food for us, while we wait for ixy to be released from the hospital. i went home to grab a few things until it hit me… the lab in my dream looked like my dad's lab. so, i thought that there’s no way he would do that. i needed to prove that he didn’t do that, so, later on, i left at midnight. i went to my dad's lab and broke in. i looked all over the place but could not find the tube that had my mom in it then, i fell in a hole. i saw my mom, in that tube then i heard someone walking above me. i hid until they left but it was no stranger it was my dad! my heart was beating out of my chest, then he left. i tried to get my mom out of the tube when i saw my dad in the reflection of the tube. i was so scared that i passed out when i woke up ixy was there. i told everyone in the room, what i had seen but they just laugh at me. i went back to my dad's lab but there was nothing there. i thought it over but none of it made sense, i knew my dad was hiding my mom. i tried to tell everyone but they all said “i was crazy”, so i looked into it myself. all the evidence pointed to my dad, so i questioned him myself. out of nowhere, he hit me over the head. i was right next to my mom in a tube. i tried to get out but i saw my dad. then he started peeling off his skin and it was. i passed out when i woke up, no one was in the room. i was all alone. the end