;w; i am writing a horror story but i need . i am writing a story that could scare anyone no matter what their fear is. i'm stuck on how to make the reader feel uneasy and what to do with my story. ; -;

You need descriptive words to set the scenes in the story and use words like 'suddenly' to shock the readers.

E.g. Inside was dark and cold. I heard the maniac laughs nearby. I covered my mouth in fear once I realised his shadows approached the bedside.    

the water represents a powerful force, and supports the idea that farquhar cannot escape his fate.

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