Hi! you will choose 1 paragraph from my essay under that paragraph you will retype the whole thing and make it better by adding in adjectives, or using better verbs and correct any mistakes. under that you will type up a new paragraph telling about the changes you made: -) 100 points need asap the jellyfish population is taking over the ocean, jellyfish lay up to 40,000 which causes less fish for fishermen. fishermen and other fish, jellyfish are causing fishermen to get less fish get stung. making candy out of jelly jellyfish, schools are starting to make candy out of jellyfish and sell it for money. so, they can buy new nets for the fishermen. why did they not talk about getting bad stings from jellyfish? to begin, the number of mnemiopsis (knee-me-opsis) jellyfish blooms are leaving fisherman without fish, causing them to lose millions. in fact, they can hatch some 40,000 eggs daily. these blooms eat the larvae and eggs of fish that fisherman, especially local ones of the black sea, depend on, resulting in the loss of money. clearly, the problem is growing at a rapid rate. meanwhile, the jellyfish swarms are affecting fisheries, but the problem is also spreading to power plants. these plants are in japan, israel, and scotland. plankton ecologist steve hay says, "science data shows that over the past few years there has been an increase in swarms of jellyfish.” when the swarms clog the power plants, the people lose electricity which creates many upset citizens. with so many people affected, there needs to be some solutions. today, there is an unlikely hero in the black sea. a different species of jellyfish called the bereo jellyfish found its way into the black sea. this species eats the mnemiopsis jellyfish. the bereo are creating a more balanced ecosystem. although this has saved the black sea, scientists are wary about using the bereo in other seas. “we are thinking about using the bereo in other areas, but we are concerned. there is a real fear of negative ecological consequences from introducing new species.