The “read books, share the love” advertisement effectively uses the association technique to convince people to read more books. the advertisement targets parents who could easily associate the children in the picture with their own children. this has a positive connotation of intimacy and love. the image implies that reading is not just intellectually beneficial, but that it creates a closer bond between parents and their children. because of this association technique, parents are persuaded to read to their children. most parents certainly would want their children to do well academically and feel loved at the same time. therefore, this ad effectively encourages literacy. which of the following revisions would most improve this paragraph? specific details from the poster a strong topic sentence a discussion of the techniques used in the ad additional information about the ad in general

Option D. A revision that would most improve the paragraph would be to add additional information about the ad in general.

Explanation:

A good revision to add to the paragraph would be to include a brief phrase that would describe in general terms the ad, so that all the remarks that are made about it in the paragraph would become more cohesive and clear. When reading the unrevised paragraph, the reader can get an idea of what the ad was about but it is not clear what was in the ad itself, so a brief description of the poster and what it contained would be helpful.

the illustration   that would give a reader a clear understanding of the text is a picture of men constructing the frame of a building.the frame is made of iron bars. the text describes the job of blacksmiths'. these were very organised and they had different names: "the driver" and "the heater". the text describes the way in which these men worked ; they worked iron pieces as if they were playing a sport. in fact, the text wants to show the men's skills. the text also puts some emphasis on the use of '' rivets'' in construction. this kind of nails were not always used in the construction of manhattan.

some examples:

"and with an underhand toss he hurled the smoking rivet straight at the catcher, who caught it in mid-air in his catching can." men's skills

"when the driver was ready for a new " the emphasis on the rivet ( special nail used in construction).

" it against a beam to remove any cinders, and jammed it into the waiting hole. " the emphasis on the rivet.