Put it on sale… is this right to say?

What is the authors purpose in writing this paragraph

Which sentence will fatima’s teacher most likely ask her to revise?

What is the main problem with the following critique? “you put some thought into it, but you obviously do not care much about the topic you are presenting.” a. it is not ethical. b. it is not constructive c. it is not specific. d. it is not behavior focused.