What can the writer do to improve the format and structure of this letter of complaint? the format and structure of the letter is correct as is. the sender's name should be removed from the top, and the first paragraph should be indented. the sender's name and address should be removed from the top. the body should have more details about why the store wouldn't exchange the system.

My necktie rich and modest, but asserted by a simple pin-[they will say: "but how his arms and legs are thin! "]do i daredisturb the universe? in a minute there is timefor decisions and revisions which a minute will reverse.which lines indicate that the speaker is concerned about what others think of him? my morning coat, my collar mounting firmly to the chin,my necktie rich and modest, but asserted by a simple pin-in a minute there is timefor decisions and revisions which a minute will reverse.o with a bald spot in the middle of my hair[they will say: "how his hair is growing thin! "]and indeed there will be timeto wonder, "do i dare? " and, "do i dare? "

Which revision of this sentence best uses direct characterization?

What is the independent cause in this sentence? "if the poem is about going mad when love is lost, what would happen if love didn't die? "