Would this song ever make it to mainstream radio? I just wrote it in about 5 minutes, because when I write a song I finish a song...
What do you think?
And if it's copied I can sue. I have records.

Broken Room - Jasz Bea
When will I be good enough for you
(ehhh)
When will the stars be enough for you

When will time freeze everything?
To leave us in two

Will it leave us trapped inside a
Broken room

When my heart is breakin'
And my body’s shakin'
And my eyes are filling the seas

When you’re taken
My last breath and
Leaving me

I fear the dark
And a broken heart
When all I did
Would tear you apart

Because

Nothing was enough for you
I did all
You wanted me to do

You left me alone in the dark
And inside our
Broken rm

I know its now perfect
But it felt just fine
I couldn’t imagine the pain
When you’d
Leave me behind…

I’m stuck
Out of luck
When you took the other piece of my heart and didn’t
Give a ….

I couldn’t be
All you wanted for me
Because nothing I did was ever good enough
Good enough for you…

You left me alneee
And now all I am is gne

I fear the dark and a broken heart
Broken heart
Broken heart

I fear the dark and a broken heart
Broken heart

BROKEN HEART (loud note)

I fear the dark
And a broken heart
When all I did
Would tear you apart

Because

Nothing was enough for you
I did all
You wanted me to do

You left me alone in the dark
And inside our
Broken rm

(crash ending instrumental)