Okay so I wrote this poem and I need to know if it's good or not Tittle "You're what I desire"

By: Alexandria

Poem: You are what I desire they way you say you love me puts me on fire, you're kind thoughtful ways makes me wanna hold you each and every day. You're eyes shine brighter then the stars, look up there you are!! Before we met I was unsure but now I know you're mine for sure. Lightest day darkest night I'm her to hold you in every fight. I prayed for a miracle and here you came you name is forever planted in my brain. When I'm sad you're always there now I know you really care. My time is done I'm saying Goodbye I'll never forget you you'll always be mine
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