Faces of glass, tears turned to stone letting go of their past for well we have known
what we are required to have before ever to let go four bodies not gold at the end of the da-n rainbow

We are the common problems
We're fake faces and lies,
Discriminating people, making friends, getting what we want and cutting our ties,
You can look a thousand times without wanting to see.
I want you to see something That you don't want it to be.
This world's a little f--ked up we can't fix this da-n place we gotta to own up to our problems,
own up to your mistakes

Childhood dreams shattered like sugar glass
Instead of fulfilling our worlds we feel our mines with abhorrent mass
We give our own brains a uncomment Task
Only because we wanted to answer question ourselves have asked
lies, tears, reflection faces, and gas masks we are humanity
but I'm scared we won't last
once again I'll ask
Where are the monsters? You turn the lights on
and they're gone in a flash?

Who are we supposed to be, am I supposed to be you,(NO you) who am I who's me
don't you understand our world in crisis
once you understand that key, you understand it can't be fixed and you must let it be

Help!I wrote this around 12 and I need to know it sounds okay.