Can i get some feedback on this poem? i need to present something. i also need with coming up with a title. i'm a girl nobody likes i fail at everything even though i try i'm a weak person that wants to cry but there are no tears left it wasn't my tears that shed but my heart instead thoughts of darkness screw with my head i'm painfully aware that i'm alive the scars but they've got to hide i might get stuck in a hospital, stuck in a lie who are they to tell us that it's alright?