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Explanation:

Here are 9 editing tips for magazine editors:

Remove Weak Descriptions. You'll often find weak descriptions in the form of bad adjectives.  

Keep it Simple. Long sentences often lose the reader.  

Focus on Micro-Edits.  

Remove Jargon.

Consider Formatting.  

Avoid Nominalization

Remove the Passive Voice.  

Use Contractions.

replace   c   with   a   and simplify.

a = c , b = a, q = n , 2 , a = c , 900 b= a , 700 , q = n , 600 , 2 = b o t h , b = a , q = n