If someone could help me fix this to sound better and "make more sense and use better grammar" like my teacher asked me to do, it would be so so so helpful ^v^ thx! But gazing at this love-less boy the girl made a decision…she would give this boy her love. So she did. But you see, This girl, she gave that boy her whole entire heart. Not because she felt pity for him or because She would take it back later on or even to make her look great to society, but, because she was very much aware that he required it, more than she ever would.

"[because of the emancipation proclamation] the condition of things [became] … unsettled, revolutionary, with nothing clearly defined, neither slave nor slaveholder having any rights which they felt bound mutually to respect … slave property in the state of missouri was almost a dead weight to the owner; he could not sell because there were no buyers."—h.c. bruce, a former slave in missouri what does this excerpt suggest about the effects of the emancipation proclamation? a. it also undermined slavery in the border states despite not being in effect there.b. it caused complete disintegration of southern society in the states that seceded.c. it led to slave owners not even trying to stop their slaves from leaving the farms.d. it prevented riots or chaos as both owners and slaves simply ignored each other.